In this writing, Abby has shown that she can use interesting words to make her story better.
Look at the words that have hearts beside them. Abby chose good words here.
Farewell Mrs Jenny She
9 years ago
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You have added some super words to your writing, these words help me to get a picture in my head when I read your writing.
ReplyDeleteThe wind must have been scary and I can imagine you running inside as fast as you could. 'Running as fast as you could' - made me think of the gingerbread man running as fast as he could !
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