Disco in the Storm

In this writing, we helped Oliver to work on one of our goals.
We wanted him to add more detail to make his story more interesting so we asked him some questions and used the answers to turn his simple sentences into complex sentences.
It sounds like Oliver and his Dad had a great time during the storm.

The Storm

In this writing, Abby has shown that she can use interesting words to make her story better.
Look at the words that have hearts beside them. Abby chose good words here.