Maddison at Martins Bay

Cody's Adventures

Milly's Fishing Day

Yesterday me and my family went fishing. We didn't catch any fish but a man on his boat gave us three huge big snappers.
We got nibbles on our rods. I was screaming when the fish pulled on the rod.

Bridie's Computer

On the weekend
On the weekend my mum snuck into my room and got on my computer and put some memory in my computer and downloaded flash reader in in my computer. Now it works like a dream.
Sent from my iPod (Bridie used notes on the iPod Touch to write this story.)

Tom's Fishing Day

The Hammock

Disco in the Storm

In this writing, we helped Oliver to work on one of our goals.
We wanted him to add more detail to make his story more interesting so we asked him some questions and used the answers to turn his simple sentences into complex sentences.
It sounds like Oliver and his Dad had a great time during the storm.

The Storm

In this writing, Abby has shown that she can use interesting words to make her story better.
Look at the words that have hearts beside them. Abby chose good words here.

Colour Poems

Colour poems
We have been thinking about the way colours can be used to communicate.
Please read our colour poems and try to see the pictures we have tried to create with words.
We were learning to use adjectives to make our poems paint pictures in our minds.

View more presentations from Tina Donnell.
Here is a link to poems about colour by other children. I hope you like them too.
Here is an animoto version. I wonder which one you will like best and why.