We will use this blog to post some of the writing we do in class. This year we are using Kid Pix for writing our stories as well as stories posted on the blog. Sometimes our work is scanned from our books.
A cat like a leopard sounds great. I laughed when I read the bit about Mum wants to shot it ! Not that that is funny, but just way you have said it so bluntly, it comes across as funny and I can just imagine a Mum saying that.
4/3/2011 We are learning to write sentences that begin with a capital letter and end with a fullstop. Please read our stories and comment if you notice these things.
Great writing - I'd love to have a cat that looked like a leopard!
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