Dillon's Fishing Trip

On Saturday me and my Dad and Dads friends went fishing, We only got a baby fish. Then we had diner and my Dads friends and all of us had a picnic.Then all of us Then we all went home me and my Dad we `watching TV Then Mam and my brother was home

I went to my Mum's place

On Friday I went to my mum's place. I stayed the night. The next day my cousin came over. I asked my mum if I cod go to Granny's place and she said yes I was allowed to go to her place and I stayed the night. I got to hold one of Granny's kittens. It was fun. I like them so much because they are so fluffy and soft and that is why I liked them so much.

Quinn's Birthday

On Sunday it was my birthday and I went to Valentines it was soooo COOL. You even got to make you’re own sunday. You can even put jelly beans on it. You can eat as much as you like. these are the things that I got: a ball that has a string that conects to a band that wraps around you’re wrist and you throw and then... it comes back & I also got a bag not just a bag a rip-curl bag! also I got some biononacles, a compis mixed with a magnafieing glass and and a ruler! It’s sooo COOL I even turned it into a necklace. Anyway you could put a marshmallow on a little stick and put it under the chocalate fonltan and eat it it’s sooo COOL and

Things that float that help or do not help us

An iceberg does not help because it could make a hole in a boat.
A life jacket can help because it can save people in case they drown.
Phoenix

My Nana

After school my Nana is going to pick me up because my mum has to work late to get. Some money but me and nana are going to have lots of fun we are going to play with. The china balls but if it rains we have to play tee ball but the coolest thing is having a. Walk in the paddock to collect the eggs and Vegtables and nuts then we go to have. Dinner every time nana cooks dinner for me my mum is here but i can have some spare time at nana,s house i like staying at nana,s at nana
by Phoenix

Grifin's Weekend Story

On the weekend I went to Waiwera.
Before we went to Waiwera we got some lego.
First we put our lego things in the house. Then we hopped in the car. At last we went to Waiwera.
I swam in the movie pool. It was hot.
The next day Josiah came for a sleepover. He brought his lego. It was fun.

When Katerina Lost Her First Tooth

When I lost my first tooth, the tooth fairy brought me a teddy and my brother helped find it. It was by Mum’s bed. When i find it there was something under it.
Katerina

Nathan L at Rainbow's End

When I went to Rainbows end, I got on the Roler coster and I Whet on the SeRer pirt bot an a Gokaks and bumper boat and FearfaII and I whet to go on the meneu pan and is was fun.

Working with Dad

Dad helped me put the motorbike in revs and he and I driv the car at hamaking. I help Dad on the weekend on the quad.
Jack
Jack worked on his own to write this story. He has listened to the sounds to try the words.

On the weekend I went motor biking and I road my brothers motor bike. It was in a paddock.
On Friday when my mum went to Dick Smith and got Star Wars the Clone Wars on wii she went into Duck's Crossing and bought Sam, Matthew and me a doughnut.
I was happy to get Star Wars on wii and it was fun riding the motorbikes.
David
David worked on this story a week or so ago, all by himself. Our class has read it together and made some comments and asked some questions. We helped him to make some changes.