David's D Food Poem

Donut, drink, hot dog, diet coke. The children like to have a joke.

Mount Ruapehu

In the weekend me and my brother went to Mount Ruapehu and

Mrs Bad Jelly

Mrs Bad Jelly used to eat children but they weren't on the healthy food pyramid so she stopped eating them.
Mrs Bad Jelly is a good teacher.

At Rugby by David

On the weekend I went to rugby and we won the game. My team is Mahurangi. It was fun because I got Player of the Day.

On the weekend I went motor biking and I road my brothers motor bike. It was in a paddock.
On Friday when my mum went to Dick Smith and got Star Wars the Clone Wars on wii she went into Duck's Crossing and bought Sam, Matthew and me a doughnut.
I was happy to get Star Wars on wii and it was fun riding the motorbikes.
David
David worked on this story a week or so ago, all by himself. Our class has read it together and made some comments and asked some questions. We helped him to make some changes.