We will use this blog to post some of the writing we do in class. This year we are using Kid Pix for writing our stories as well as stories posted on the blog. Sometimes our work is scanned from our books.
Wednesday, April 21, 2010
Going on a Boat
When I go on a boat, I take my friend Charlotte and a snack too and my Dad takes a lot of bait so we can catch a lot of fish and I bring a toy for me and Charlotte too and I have a lot of fun on the sea.
I like your story. I like the way you used your own ideas in your writing. My wish is that sometimes you could use a fullstop and a capital letter instead of "and". Ms Donnell
4/3/2011 We are learning to write sentences that begin with a capital letter and end with a fullstop. Please read our stories and comment if you notice these things.
I like your story. I like the way you used your own ideas in your writing.
ReplyDeleteMy wish is that sometimes you could use a fullstop and a capital letter instead of "and".
Ms Donnell