Wednesday, April 21, 2010

Going on a Boat

When I go on a boat, I take my friend Charlotte and a snack too and my Dad takes a lot of bait so we can catch a lot of fish and I bring a toy for me and Charlotte too and I have a lot of fun on the sea.

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  1. I like your story. I like the way you used your own ideas in your writing.
    My wish is that sometimes you could use a fullstop and a capital letter instead of "and".
    Ms Donnell

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