Monday, August 10, 2009

A Trampoline Accident

On Sunday me and my brother went on the trampoline. After a little while my brother bounced me up and Bang! I fell off the trampoline. Next my leg was still on the trampoline. I fell off two times. I was crying so hard. My eyes were red and my eyes were watering. I hate what happened to me. I won't let that happen again.
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  1. room2August 10, 2009 at 3:23 PM

    Chantel, you have done such a good job on this story.
    I like the way you have used sentence beginnings like "After a little while..." and "Next..."
    I like the "Bang!" when you fell off the trampoline.
    I like the way you gave your story a good ending too. Ms Donnell

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