Thursday, May 14, 2009

Nathan's Yellow Tail Fish Story

On Wednesday our whole class looked at a yellow tail fish through a microscope on the computer. First we looked at the eye and we looked at The back Bons it WAS yaky. It had Fins and inside the mouth it had Little teeth. The giIIs mack the fish brev throught the gills. The tail helps the FISH move.

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  1. Well done Nathan L. YOU have done a really good job on this story. We helped you check it. We added -ed to look and we changed the spelling of fish and we added some words to make it make sense.

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  2. I like your story it sounds COOL. You should look at my storys.Grifin

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