We will use this blog to post some of the writing we do in class. This year we are using Kid Pix for writing our stories as well as stories posted on the blog. Sometimes our work is scanned from our books.
Thursday, May 14, 2009
Nathan's Yellow Tail Fish Story
On Wednesday our whole class looked at a yellow tail fish through a microscope on the computer. First we looked at the eye and we looked at The back Bons it WAS yaky. It had Fins and inside the mouth it had Little teeth. The giIIs mack the fish brev throught the gills. The tail helps the FISH move.
Well done Nathan L. YOU have done a really good job on this story. We helped you check it. We added -ed to look and we changed the spelling of fish and we added some words to make it make sense.
4/3/2011 We are learning to write sentences that begin with a capital letter and end with a fullstop. Please read our stories and comment if you notice these things.
Well done Nathan L. YOU have done a really good job on this story. We helped you check it. We added -ed to look and we changed the spelling of fish and we added some words to make it make sense.
ReplyDeleteI like your story it sounds COOL. You should look at my storys.Grifin
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