Picnic Stories by the Kiwi Writing Group

Here are stories by the Kiwi Writing Group about the school picnic.

A Cure For Annie McTavish

This week Room 2 children were reading "A Rumble and a Grumble" by Jo Windsor.
Annie had a problem. Every night when she closed her eyes to go to sleep there was... a rumble and a grumble and a rattle and a roar, and Angus McTavish began to snore.
Annie tried and she tried to find a cure and when she finally did... guess what happened? She went to sleep and she started to snore.
Here are some ideas the orange writing group had for a cure.
by Zac
by Charlotte
by Zara
by Oliver

Responsibilities at the School Picnic

Everyone was writing about our responsibilities at the picnic.
Here are some ideas from the children in the Apples Writing Group.

Yesterday it was the school picnic.
We had to keep with our teams. We had to watch where we were going. by Jade

We have to listen to Mr Lockie.
Tell a parent if you need to go to the toilet.
Do not drop rubbish on the ground. by Joel

This is some responsibilities at the beach.
Wear your hat.
And swimming in boundaries.
Eat your lunch. by Dan

The beach was fun.
I was in red team.
Everyone had to wear hats.
You had to stay in boundaries. by Milan

The other day we went to Martins Bay.
Tell a parent where you are going. We wore our hats. Pick up rubbish. by Grace