On Saturday I went on a trampoline. I did a flip. I have got a rmote kontol cr and bot. In the holedays i went on our yilow bot went on the bscit near some dolfns. I rely want to go on the fast xitor bot.
by Broady
Broady has worked very hard on this story. He has been listening to the sounds in words really well. Next week we will have another look at this story. Good work so far, Broady!

I made banana chocolate chip muffins. I licked the bowl. It was yummy.
by Len

Tenaija's South Island Holiday

On the holidays I went to the seal colony in the South Island and I got to pat a baby seal and it was heavy. and I went to the Fox glacier and it was cold and I eta some and it was cold. I went to the Franz Joseph glacier and we went to have a feel. It felt cold on my hans and it was slippery. And I went to a cave and when I went in it was dark and I saw cave wetas and dad took a picture because we were under a big rock.

This story was written on the computer by Tenaija. Our class has read it together and made some suggestions to make it better. We used spell check. I hope Tenaija will get another chance to read this and work to make it even better. What a great start!

Logan's Big Day

Yesterday we went to Waiwera. We went on a bush walk. We didn't go all the way. Then we went back to the car. and I played I spy with Dad. After that we left and we went to the Fish and Chips shop. The fish were full of grease. We won't go to that one again. Then we went to the 4 square. Someone was clipping his nails so we had to go to another dairy. When we got there we got an ice block. I got a goody-goody gumdrop one. Then we went to drop off Matthew, Michael's friend and then we went home.

Anna's Dolphin Experience

In the holidays I went camping with my family and friends.
One day when we were at the beach Dad brought down the canoe. Then Karen told Dad that there were dolphins so Nic and Kendyll went out with Dad but then Kendyll swapped with Dad and came in to get me.
When we got there, the dolphins started playing. When the dolphins went under the canoe they looked like eels. They were dark blue.
When you put your head under you could hear the dolphins.